prefotit prvni (dost zjevne nezvladnuta kompozice), vyhodit treti (nadbytecnej zaber, dokonce bych rekl duplicitni) a evig (nefunkcni kompozice, prilis staticka), a bude to gut.
dalsi nitpicking: na leod mas pro my vnimani trochu moc toho vrsku a erug je mirou kontrastu nekonzistentni se zbytkem.
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Milan Bureš
dalsi nitpicking: na leod mas pro my vnimani trochu moc toho vrsku a erug je mirou kontrastu nekonzistentni se zbytkem.
pokud by se to dotahlo, bylo by mi to sympaticky.
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