it's vital for understanding that the curtain is certain ;)
your writing might be a feeble one, yet the introductory note makes sense to me and goes perfectly with the first picture.
i guess it wasn't even supposed to go with the rest of the series. (may as well be you just didn't grasp the fstop form factor as far as series and portfolios go.)

all the pictures are good, but it's impossible to comment on them as a whole since they're rather different. [orev] especially (more of a family-album shot).