neni to dobry (fur mich)
a zrejme to cely "spatne" na me pusobi ta kompozice
ridic je ok, kocky taky, ale jinak je to prumerny
tim chci rict,
ze byt to cely svenknuty doleva, tak to treba bude jinak
a treba taky ne
ale abys nemyslel kocicaku, tu scenku, v jeji podstate, si odnasim do pelechu bez problemu :)
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Ianus Germanicus
a zrejme to cely "spatne" na me pusobi ta kompozice
ridic je ok, kocky taky, ale jinak je to prumerny
tim chci rict,
ze byt to cely svenknuty doleva, tak to treba bude jinak
a treba taky ne
ale abys nemyslel kocicaku, tu scenku, v jeji podstate, si odnasim do pelechu bez problemu :)
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