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Dodo Šimko
Matúš Mudroch
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2011-08-13 21:55
ta prva je prijemna. hlavne mi to pripada skvele, ten kontrast tej domacej pohodicky a dejin. a pritom je tam aj zjavna spojnica. :)
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