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Tomáš Szépe
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2005-05-08 19:53
jen drobnost ke kompozici: pokud dole nebyl nejakej jo fest bordel, myslim ze by bylo lepsi sklonit a riznout celo ty vrchni hlavy, ty plochy by nabraly libivejsi pomery hadam.
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