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Izidor Macháček
Pišta Molnár
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2006-06-19 22:20
okrem toho ze som natvrdly a nerozumiem spojitosti k versom, pride mi to ako pise kristina prilis konkretne.
jedine co by to mohlo imho vytrhnut su tam tie tiene, ale nie takto ako to mas.
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Izidor Macháček
jedine co by to mohlo imho vytrhnut su tam tie tiene, ale nie takto ako to mas.
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